Index: modules/menu/menu.module
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RCS file: /cvs/drupal/drupal/modules/menu/menu.module,v
retrieving revision 1.99
diff -u -r1.99 menu.module
--- modules/menu/menu.module	30 Nov 2006 01:55:31 -0000	1.99
+++ modules/menu/menu.module	27 Dec 2006 19:58:39 -0000
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
   if ($may_cache) {
     $items[] = array('path' => 'admin/build/menu',
       'title' => t('Menus'),
-      'description' => t("Control your site's navigation menu, create menu blocks, as well as rename and reorganize menu items."),
+      'description' => t("Control your site's navigation menu, create menu blocks, or rename and reorganize menu items."),
       'callback' => 'menu_overview',
       'access' => user_access('administer menu'));
     $items[] = array('path' => 'admin/build/menu/list',
Index: modules/system/system.module
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RCS file: /cvs/drupal/drupal/modules/system/system.module,v
retrieving revision 1.432
diff -u -r1.432 system.module
--- modules/system/system.module	26 Dec 2006 14:01:41 -0000	1.432
+++ modules/system/system.module	27 Dec 2006 20:20:44 -0000
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@
     $items[] = array(
       'path' => 'admin/build/themes',
       'title' => t('Themes'),
-      'description' => t('Change which theme your site uses or allows users to set.'),
+      'description' => t('Select and configure the themes available in or used by your site.'),
       'callback' => 'drupal_get_form',
       'callback arguments' => array('system_themes'),
       'access' => $access);
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@
     $items[] = array(
       'path' => 'admin/settings/error-reporting',
       'title' => t('Error reporting'),
-      'description' => t('Control how Drupal deals with errors including 403/404 errors as well as PHP error reporting.'),
+      'description' => t('Configure PHP error reporting and specify 403/404 page error settings.'),
       'callback' => 'drupal_get_form',
       'callback arguments' => array('system_error_reporting_settings'));
     $items[] = array(
@@ -235,13 +235,13 @@
     $items[] = array(
       'path' => 'admin/settings/file-system',
       'title' => t('File system'),
-      'description' => t('Tell Drupal where to store uploaded files and how they are accessed.'),
+      'description' => t('Configure an access method and other settings for uploaded files.'),
       'callback' => 'drupal_get_form',
       'callback arguments' => array('system_file_system_settings'));
     $items[] = array(
       'path' => 'admin/settings/image-toolkit',
       'title' => t('Image toolkit'),
-      'description' => t('Choose which image toolkit to use if you have installed optional toolkits.'),
+      'description' => t('Select an optional image toolkit for use, if installed.'),
       'callback' => 'drupal_get_form',
       'callback arguments' => array('system_image_toolkit_settings'));
     $items[] = array(
@@ -253,13 +253,13 @@
     $items[] = array(
       'path' => 'admin/settings/date-time',
       'title' => t('Date and time'),
-      'description' => t("Settings for how Drupal displays date and time, as well as the system's default timezone."),
+      'description' => t("Configure date/time display settings and set the system's default timezone."),
       'callback' => 'drupal_get_form',
       'callback arguments' => array('system_date_time_settings'));
     $items[] = array(
       'path' => 'admin/settings/site-maintenance',
       'title' => t('Site maintenance'),
-      'description' => t('Take the site off-line for maintenance or bring it back online.'),
+      'description' => t('Toggle the site between normal operation and offline maintenance modes.'),
       'callback' => 'drupal_get_form',
       'callback arguments' => array('system_site_maintenance_settings'));
     $items[] = array(
@@ -274,14 +274,14 @@
     $items[] = array(
       'path' => 'admin/logs',
       'title' => t('Logs'),
-      'description' => t('View system logs and other status information.'),
+      'description' => t('View system logs and status information.'),
       'callback' => 'system_admin_menu_block_page',
       'weight' => 5,
       'position' => 'left');
     $items[] = array(
       'path' => 'admin/logs/status',
       'title' => t('Status report'),
-      'description' => t("Get a status report about your site's operation and any detected problems."),
+      'description' => t("View site status and note self-detected problems or issues, if any."),
       'callback' => 'system_status',
       'weight' => 10,
       'access' => $access);
