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< +uploading, and search, and there are many configuration options. You can add
< +features to your website by enabling additional core modules, and remove
< +features by disabling modules. Also, thousands of contributed modules (for
< +functionality not included with Drupal core) are available for download.
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> +uploading, and search. Core comes with many options which allow site-specific
> +configuration. In addition to the core modules, there are thousands of 
> +contributed modules (for functionality not included with Drupal core) 
> +available for download.
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< + * See also: "Custom themes and modules", below.
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> + * See also: "Developing for Drupal" for writing your own modules, below.
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< +theme settings (colors, logos, using a different theme for administrative tasks,
< +etc.). You can also create your own custom themes. The theme system allows you
< +to customize the appearance and alter the default output by overriding
< +functions, templates, and CSS.
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> +theme settings such as colors, logos, or using a different theme for 
> +administrative tasks. You can also create your own custom themes. The theme 
> +system allows you to customize the appearance and alter the default output by
> +overriding functions, templates, and CSS.
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< +a "hook". Before you create your own module, try searching at http://drupal.org
< +-- you may find that an existing core or contributed module can be used to meet
< +your requirements. Or if it comes close, maybe you can add a feature to an
< +existing module and contribute it back to the project. This saves time and
< +improves the quality of existing code for everyone.
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> +a "hook". Before you create your own module, try searching at 
> +http://drupal.org.
> +You may find that an existing core or contributed module can be used to meet
> +your requirements. If you find a module that comes close, consider adding your
> +features to the module and contributing it back to the project. This saves 
> +time and improves the quality of existing code for everyone.