documentation grammar and spelling

I am a Drupal beginner. I noticed some grammar and spelling.

Current version:
Displays your Terms & Conditions (T&Cs) to users who want to register, and requires that they accept the T&C before their registration is accepted.
If T&Cs are changed users with an existing account will be asked to accept the new version, and will not be able to log in until they have.

Proposed changes:
Displays your Terms & Conditions to users who want to register, and requires that they accept the T&C before their registration is accepted.
If T&Cs are changed, then users with an existing account will be asked to accept the new version, and will not be able to log in until they have.

Current version:
Notes can be added to each version of the T&Cs explaining the changes that have been made, these are displayed to users who are asked to accept new versions of the T&Cs (if they accepted a previous version).

Proposed changes:
Notes can be added to each version of the T&Cs explaining the changes that have been made. These notes are displayed to users who are asked to accept new versions of the T&Cs (if they accepted a previous version).

Current version:
When a revision is made only users that have previously accepted the T&Cs in that language, and new users, are asked to accept the new T&Cs. This is intended for improvements to the translation rather than changes to the actual terms and conditions being offered.

Proposed changes:
When a revision is made, then only users that have previously accepted the T&Cs in that language, and new users, are asked to accept the new T&Cs. This feature is intended for improvements to the translation rather than changes to the actual terms and conditions being offered.

Current version:
filter_xss_admin() is used to filter content for display, this is a very permissive XSS/HTML filter intended for admin-only use.

Proposed changes:
filter_xss_admin() is used to filter content for display. This filter is a very permissive XSS/HTML filter intended for admin-only use.

Current version:
Legal 6.x.8.x is the latest version. There was a big jump in version numbers to avoid confusion with a 6.x.7.x tag that had previously been created by accident.

Proposed changes:
Drupal 6: Legal 6.x.8.x is the latest version. There was a big jump in version numbers to avoid confusion with a 6.x.7.x tag that had previously been created by accident.