Improves readability; gets rid of technical jargon; provides concrete example; provides suggestions for how permissions can be used. See attached.

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#1 user_20.patch2.2 KBSteve Dondley
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new user_20.patch2.2 KB

Here's a second draft. A bit shorter. It also removes some passive language.

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Status: Needs review » Fixed

Committed to HEAD.

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Status: Fixed » Closed (fixed)