From original issue: http://drupal.org/node/537828

This definitely needs a second set of eyes, I was struggling a bit with how much of the old content to keep...

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dbeall commented

Just having a look around tonight.
one thought, for what's it worth..

One word sort of hit me in this string:
The blog module allows all users with appropriate permissions to create content on in their personal blog.

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dbeall commented

btw, I know about the struggle with what to keep.. It's a tough one to get through.

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arianek commented

hmm. that is an interesting/debatable one. as a disclaimer, maybe there are regional differences in how people talk about blogging, but in my experience, people say things like:

- "i've got to put a new post up on my blog tonight."

- "someone asked me to write about this on my blog."

it's definitely on that is used, and not in. but i'll certainly take more votes on this!

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jhodgdon
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I would put the sections about the blogs block and about single-user blogs into the Uses section and leave "About" to be just the general overview. As it is now, it makes it look like the multi-user blog is the only use for the module. So maybe have Uses headers:
Single-user blogs
Site-wide blog
Navigation
Blocks

I agree with arianek: either "on" or "in" is fine.

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arianek commented

indeed, will do - after a couple reviews i realized i need to do that for all the ones i did! thanks jennifer :-)

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Status: Needs review » Needs work

Status change was omitted before

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arianek commented
Status: Needs work » Needs review
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edited as suggested above.

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Status: Needs review » Reviewed & tested by the community

I like it now. :)

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arianek commented
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Capitalized B for consistency with other committed help text. Re-RTBC

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Status: Reviewed & tested by the community » Needs work

The standard for capitalization is not being followed. See http://drupal.org/node/632280 -- should start with "The foo module" not "The Foo module" according to standard.

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arianek commented
Status: Needs work » Reviewed & tested by the community

caps are a go - RTBC

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Status: Reviewed & tested by the community » Fixed

Wow, great job making this silly module actually make sense! :)

I made two minor tweaks:

"By default, the blog entries are.."

there were two spaces before the B. Reduced to one.

"...may be enabled at the <a href=""@blocks"">blocks administration page</a>"

Two sets of "s. Reduced to one.

Committed to HEAD!

Status: Fixed » Closed (fixed)
Issue tags: -Documentation, -d7help

Automatically closed -- issue fixed for 2 weeks with no activity.

Issue tags: +Documentation, +d7help

Restoring issue tags, see #2125755: System messages removed all issue tags during D7 upgrade.