Original issue: http://drupal.org/node/537828
This one required a bit more updating of the text - needs double checking for D7 accuracy. Also it's pretty lengthy, so open to pieces to cut, but I couldn't get it much more succinct without chopping potentially useful info out.
Also, relocated the help function to the top of the file (it was buried right at the end).
| Comment | File | Size | Author |
|---|---|---|---|
| #8 | help_book4.patch | 6.44 KB | arianek |
| #6 | help_book3.patch | 6.44 KB | arianek |
| #5 | help_book2.patch | 6.42 KB | arianek |
| #5 | help_book_after2.png | 121.24 KB | arianek |
| help_book_after.png | 98.52 KB | arianek |
Comments
Comment #1
dbeall commentedmore looking around tonight.. this one string maybe has one extra word..?
Users with the administer book outlines permission can add any type of content to a book by selecting the appropriate book outline while editing the content. They can also view a list of all books,
andedit and rearrange section titles on the [...]Comment #2
arianek commentedthanks for the input, but no, that and is certainly supposed to be there - removing it changes the meaning of that half of the sentence!
Comment #3
jhodgdonRe #1 - I agree with arianek on that one!
How about moving more of the content currently in "About" into "Uses"? For instance the explanation of how to add content to a book outline, which could have Uses header "Adding content to books". I think the other help pages have how-to information under Uses and general info in About. ???
The patch itself needs minor cleanup (text aside) - all the lines should be indented the same amount. (Possibly you used tabs instead of spaces? Should use spaces only.)
Also, just noticed the word "posts" in the help text for the other two pages (not the main help text). That should be replaced with "content". I know this isn't your fault, but might as well fix it. :)
Comment #4
arianek commentedoy, maybe there were tabs in there i didn't notice, will do - and ya, i need to move more into the Uses for sure. will roll a new one with those edits. thanks!
Comment #5
arianek commentedack, i don't know how i put 6 spaces on some of those, anyway that's fixed. moved a bunch of the content down into uses as suggested. still not sure if the collaborations use needs its own section, but left it there. got rid of those other mentions of "posts". new patch ahoy.
Comment #6
arianek commentedfixed indents
Comment #7
jhodgdonThis looks good to me now.
Comment #8
arianek commentedB caps for consistency. Re-RTBC
Comment #9
jhodgdonThe standard for capitalization is not being followed. See http://drupal.org/node/632280 -- should start with "The foo module" not "The Foo module" according to standard.
Comment #10
lisarex commentedCaps can remain per consensus in #537828: Help text for core modules - update to conform to new standard so back to RTBC :)
Comment #11
webchickLooks great! Committed to HEAD!