There are some parts in the lyrics in the break that really should need a better version. I mean, come on:
"I'm a crime without a crook"
"I'm a pod without a pea"
Is this suppose to be funny?
There are some parts in the lyrics in the break that really should need a better version. I mean, come on:
"I'm a crime without a crook"
"I'm a pod without a pea"
Is this suppose to be funny?
Comments
Comment #1
cyberschorschWe should start with posting the current lyrics. Then we can work on fixing them.
Comment #2
j4h8 commentedThe lyrics are part of the download package (SINGME.txt in the tarball).
Comment #3
cyberschorschWhat about the following:
Comment #4
dixon_Haha! Excellent! :D
Comment #5
cyberschorschComment #6
itangalo commentedI like the "Drupal with a fee" part, and would like to put it as the last line in that phrase.
However, the first phrase doesn't convince me -- there should be better lines available to replace the existing text.
Patch need more work!
Comment #7
SeanBannister commentedYeah the break has some serious issues:
+1 for :
But I do think the "a" before the t() is important.
Then there's the line "A marine without the blue", I think that one needs to change, I don't think I've done to much better, but I do prefer:
Then maybe we can replace "I'm a crime without a crook" with:
Alternatively we could use "Druplicon without his look"
Then there's "I'm a cookie without cake", how about:
Alternatively "I'm drier than corn flakes" is even be better than what we currently have, lol ;) Only kidding, great work on the song, finally we have Themers, Developers, and Musicians working together for a better Drupal. Maybe Drupal 8 will finally ship with background music in core.
Comment #8
itangalo commented@SeanBannister: You areruthless in spotting weak points in the lyrics, and great at patching them.
Count on this going into 1.1!
Comment #9
itangalo commentedOk, so here's my proposal for the break lyrics in 1.1 of the ballad:
Comments and improvements welcome, as always!
Comment #10
SeanBannister commentedYeah that's looking great, just played it through and the only small suggestions I have :
I am Drupal 2.2to
I'm Drupal 2.2I am Drupal with a feeto
I'm Drupal with a feeThe only thought when I'm awaketo
The only thought when I wakeThey're such small changes it very much depends on how you sing the song so I think we need a test or two.
Comment #11
itangalo commentedGood point. Changing to 'needs review'.
Comment #12
cyberschorschCan´t we find something better then
Comment #13
itangalo commented@Cyberschorsch: A fair question! Let's find out what the answer to this is.
Comment #14
SeanBannister commentedMaybe a reference to the drupal.org handbook?
Or how about we payout on another CMS, that'll get a laugh :
Hmm, slight change :
Comment #15
cyberschorschI would vote for the handbook instead the pageless book :)
Comment #16
itangalo commentedThe lyrics in the current state were tested in Stockholm at a Drupal 7 release party, and it seemed to work well.
Marking this issue as fixed for now.