? INSTALL-documentation-addition-and-cleanup.patch
Index: INSTALL.txt
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RCS file: /cvs/drupal/drupal/INSTALL.txt,v
retrieving revision 1.87
diff -u -p -r1.87 INSTALL.txt
--- INSTALL.txt	1 Jan 2011 22:41:24 -0000	1.87
+++ INSTALL.txt	27 Jan 2011 21:18:46 -0000
@@ -10,7 +10,6 @@ CONTENTS OF THIS FILE
  * Multisite configuration
  * More information
 
-
 REQUIREMENTS AND NOTES
 ----------------------
 
@@ -37,13 +36,12 @@ Note that all directories mentioned in t
 directory of your Drupal installation, and commands are meant to be run from
 this directory (except for the initial commands that create that directory).
 
-
 OPTIONAL SERVER REQUIREMENTS
 ----------------------------
 
 - If you want to use Drupal's "Clean URLs" feature on an Apache web server, you
   will need the mod_rewrite module and the ability to use local .htaccess
-  files. For Clean URLs support on IIS, see "Using Clean URLs with IIS"
+  files. For Clean URLs support on IIS, see "Clean URLs with IIS"
   (http://drupal.org/node/3854) in the Drupal handbook.
 
 - If you plan to use XML-based services such as RSS aggregation, you will need
@@ -60,17 +58,18 @@ OPTIONAL SERVER REQUIREMENTS
   configuration allows the web server to initiate outbound connections. Most web
   hosting setups allow this.
 
-
 INSTALLATION
 ------------
 
 1. Download and extract Drupal.
 
    You can obtain the latest Drupal release from http://drupal.org -- the files
-   are in .tar.gz format and can be extracted using most compression tools.
+   are in .tar.gz or .zip format and can be extracted using most compression
+   tools.
 
    To download and extract the files, on a typical Unix/Linux command line, use
-   the following commands (assuming you want version x.y of Drupal):
+   the following commands (assuming you want version x.y of Drupal in .tar.gz
+   format):
 
      wget http://drupal.org/files/projects/drupal-x.y.tar.gz
      tar -zxvf drupal-x.y.tar.gz
@@ -89,7 +88,7 @@ INSTALLATION
    initially:
 
    - Download a translation file for the correct Drupal version and language
-     from the translation server: http://localize.drupal.org/download
+     from the translation server: http://localize.drupal.org/translate/downloads
 
    - Place the file into your installation profile's translations
      directory. For instance, if you are using the Standard install profile,
@@ -299,7 +298,6 @@ INSTALLATION
    scripts/ directory. (Note that these scripts must be customized like the
    above example, to add your site-specific cron key and domain name.)
 
-
 BUILDING AND CUSTOMIZING YOUR SITE
 ----------------------------------
 
@@ -317,12 +315,11 @@ multisite installation, you can also pla
 site-specific directories -- see the Multisite Configuration section, below.
 
 Never edit Drupal's core modules and themes; instead, use the hooks available in
-the Drupal API. To modify the behavior of Drupal, develope a module as described
+the Drupal API. To modify the behavior of Drupal, develop a module as described
 at http://drupal.org/developing/modules. To modify the look of Drupal, create a
 subtheme as described at http://drupal.org/node/225125, or a completely new
 theme as described at http://drupal.org/documentation/theme
 
-
 MULTISITE CONFIGURATION
 -----------------------
 
@@ -332,16 +329,15 @@ its own individual configuration.
 Additional site configurations are created in subdirectories within the 'sites'
 directory. Each subdirectory must have a 'settings.php' file, which specifies
 the configuration settings. The easiest way to create additional sites is to
-copy the 'default' directory and modify the 'settings.php' file as
-appropriate. The new directory name is constructed from the site's URL. The
-configuration for www.example.com could be in 'sites/example.com/settings.php'
-(note that 'www.' should be omitted if users can access your site at
-http://example.com/).
+copy the 'default' directory and modify the 'settings.php' file as appropriate.
+The new directory name is constructed from the site's URL. The configuration for
+www.example.com could be in 'sites/example.com/settings.php' (note that 'www.'
+should be omitted if users can access your site at http://example.com/).
 
 Sites do not have to have a different domain. You can also use subdomains and
-subdirectories for Drupal sites. For example, example.com, sub.example.com,
-and sub.example.com/site3 can all be defined as independent Drupal sites. The
-setup for a configuration such as this would look like the following:
+subdirectories for Drupal sites. For example, example.com, sub.example.com, and
+sub.example.com/site3 can all be defined as independent Drupal sites. The setup
+for a configuration such as this would look like the following:
 
   sites/default/settings.php
   sites/example.com/settings.php
@@ -384,15 +380,14 @@ settings, consult http://drupal.org/gett
 For more information on configuring Drupal's file system path in a multisite
 configuration, see step 6 above.
 
-
 MORE INFORMATION
 ----------------
 
 - For additional documentation, see the online Drupal handbook:
-  http://drupal.org/handbook
+  http://drupal.org/documentation
 
-- For a list of security announcements, see the "Security announcements" page
-  at http://drupal.org/security (available as an RSS feed). This page also
+- For a list of security announcements, see the "Security advisories" page at
+  http://drupal.org/security (available as an RSS feed). This page also
   describes how to subscribe to these announcements via e-mail.
 
 - For information about the Drupal security process, or to find out how to
